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Ouder (en vrouw)

Uit hier al je creativiteit in poëzie... tekeningen of andere zaken!

Ouder (en vrouw)

Postby Charly_lawson on Wed 25 Feb, 2004 00:26

Je wordt ouder en vrouw
Ik zie het in het water van de honden
en aan het ijs dat zich daar vormt.

Ik voel het in de lucht
en in je nieuwe geuren alle dagen
hoe deze hangen en vervagen.

Je leest niet meer maar zit
in je pyama voor de televisie
Je eet niet meer de rode eerst
maar koekjes vol met vitamine.

Je wordt ouder en een vrouw
en ik zie dat overal weer anders.
Ik gebruik je tandpasta een laatste keer
en draai het water warmer.
Remember, remember the cocks of november
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Postby VeNUs on Wed 25 Feb, 2004 10:15

"ahaa": disait-il, en espanol avec un accent portugais: "je suis mort, mais je me vengerai!"
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Postby Lyra on Thu 26 Feb, 2004 23:42

Sfynx zegt:
als ze niet lief zijn, mag je ze slaan
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Postby Emin on Wed 03 Mar, 2004 21:03

ik heb dit gedicht nu een paar keer gelezen en ik vind het echt prachtig. het is inderdaad indirect heel herkenbaar, maar toch niet iets waar iedereen zomaar op zou komen. de zinnen als niet meer de rode eerst maar koekjes vol met vitamine zijn heel goed gevonden, die tonen perfect de overgang van klein meisje naar een volwassen vrouw die (uiteraard) constant op haar figuur let.
ik ben echt touched...
meh!
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