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het oeverloze, de onvermijdelijkheid

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het oeverloze, de onvermijdelijkheid

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Postby ESS-philippe on Wed 16 Mar, 2005 14:32

Als ik mijn hart zou laten spreken zou je mond nog verder openvallen van de beledigingen.
Gelukkig voor jou moet een gedicht niet rijmen, anders was het nog slechter geweest.
Om mijn tijdelijke gevoel uit de drukken :

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Postby Mellon on Wed 16 Mar, 2005 21:33

@ESS-philippe: jij hebt liever sinterklaasgedichtjes?

Ik ben niet zo gevoellig, maar het klinkt wel aardig. ga door met het goede werk!

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Postby dolores on Wed 16 Mar, 2005 22:31

'ziekte' ja, maar in de eerste plaats 'pijn' (cf Fr: douleur):

dolor, o¯ris m (doleo)
1. (lich.) pijn [laterum; capitis; dentium];
2. (geestel.) pijn, verdriet, bedroefdheid, medeleven, ergernis (over, met: gen.; ex) [coniugis amissae over het verlies v. zijn echtgenote; ex of in alqa re]; » mihi dolori est het doet mij verdriet; dolorem alci facere, efficere, dare, afferre;
3. (poët.) (meton.) bron v. verdriet; » illa potest duris mentibus esse ~ kan verdriet veroorzaken;
4. gekwetstheid, verbittering; » dolore incensus;
5. (retor. t.t.) hartstocht, pathos.

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Postby Charly_lawson on Fri 18 Mar, 2005 20:03

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Postby dolores on Sat 19 Mar, 2005 00:15

philippe, het spijt me, maar ik vind die site die jij gaf niet zo zot goed. Des gouts et des couleurs...
Ik doelde dan met mijn vraag ook eerder op opbouwende kritiek zoals die van bobby peru, waarvoor dank. Meestal zijn mijn gedichten niet zo bombastisch, en eigenlijk is dit het voor mij ook niet zo. Het is een explosie van emotie, ok, maar dat was dan ook juist wat ik wilde bereiken, het is tenslotte een momentopname. Bon, ook hier lees je wat je wil lezen he, interpretatie.. Toch bedankt!
Trouwens mellon, ik vind niet dat dichters die bundels hebben gepubliceerd op een ander niveau moeten worden beoordeeld dan onbekenden. Een proffesioneel acteur moet bvb wel weten wat hij doet en lessen hebben gevolgd en zo en dan moet je een onderscheid maken tussen geschoold en ongeschoold. Bij dichters is dit niet het geval, want er is geen waarheid. Niemand heeft echte savoir-faire of zo, vind ik
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